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Recently, many students tend to work instead of study in school.
Some people believe that it is positive ...
However this essay will discuss the reason why I disagree ....
Firstly, working can deprive time for study from student. The more students work,
the less they study for lack of time. For example, ---
Secondly, adolescents should be protected in school. According to the report,
many criminals tend to be under-educated.
Lastly, devoting to studying will contribute to progress of our society.
During the study they can learn how to develp our society. ....
In conclusion, there are some reasons ... as I mentioned above.
I strongly disagree that students work more and more.
I suggest that our government should try to help students study harder.
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